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Unwanted Visitors

(On the Run – Part 2)

Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image above by  © Roger Bultot

Unwanted Visitors

Perry’s mind raced, and his heart pounded as he heard them run up the derelict creaky staircase, past the stuffy, dusty broom cupboard on the landing where he hid. This dump wasn’t a holiday home, Their interruption was annoying and absurd.

 The previous 24 hours had been more absurd.  He didn’t know the car was stolen when he borrowed it. And the bag swap on the tram…he had unintentionally become an accessory to a crime by picking up the wrong bag. Now they were looking for him. 

And now these excitable kids… what next?  He froze. The envelope…

Thanks for reading

This sequel started with last week’s photo prompt of the tram tracks   ©Rochelle Wisoff-Fields…and I missed posting the story before the week ran out…

However, this week’s photo prompt is also perfect!


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